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[Flames and Family] Elario Gokudera (sketch)

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My sketch of :iconmadashes2ashes:'s character who is incidentally the son of my favorite guardian, Gokudera Hayato. We're planning something big so watch out for it! <3 by the way isn't he a damn hottie?
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Looking at this, overall is a good picture of a character. There are a some noticeable anatomy flaws, like the arms but in terms of the overall picture it's decent. Because (as far as I know) this is a character sketch, the only thing that has impact is definitely the open chest. Even scrolling down the page it was like "ABS!" which is great in telling what kind of guy this is.

Technique: Technique is good, just needs some anatomical work. And anatomy is hard so I know it's easier said than done. It'll take time, but for the moment the technique is good for these purposes. Facially it's excellent. I recommend Human Anatomy for the Artist. Best book ever for studying the body.

Vision: It's fanart, but amping up the sex appeal is definite plus. Go sex appeal!