Infinite Stage: Takku's Dress Up

Hello! I hope this is okay, I've never done a critique before but I'd like to try! I don't know the character so this is all based on the appearance of the piece!

First off, Looking at the hair I think you've done a good job balancing out the strands/texture. It has a grain to it but it also doesn't feel too heavy and contrasted, which can give an unorganic look. The hair overall is nice and the highlight on it isn't over done. It's got a great balance and looks very nice!

With the shirt, the folds are done nicely but the colour seems a bit over saturated. Of course, I don't know this character so if that's canonly how colourful their shirt is then this doesn't apply! The pants have a more natural tone to them, and the shading plus folds on them flow very well with the body.

The skin has a god variety of tone and the colours you used definitely show depth on the skin plane. What I believe would help you improve is perhaps taking a bit more time and getting the details in, make them more clearly defined. This goes for the small chain around his neck too. Small things like that don't need to be super detailed, but darkening the lines would help make it look more defined.

The lines seem a bit rushed in some places, and I completely understand that. Personally I hate doing lineart and I rush it a lot. Something that works well for me is using a smaller brush and lining with long strokes. Undo-ing and redo-ing the lines constantly is annoying but very helpful in creating clean lineart.

Overall the piece is good and your colour selection and shading shows you know what you're doing, while spending perhaps a little more time on the smaller details would make it look ever better! It's a very good piece! I hope this was okay as a critique, and if you have any questions feel free to contact me!